I wrote this piece last Easter and have kept it to myself. I was thinking I could improve on it.
I couldn't. It's a funny thing that the inspiration which comes from my 'core self' rarely requires more than a typo tweak.
I couldn't. It's a funny thing that the inspiration which comes from my 'core self' rarely requires more than a typo tweak.
it is perfect, no tweaking or improvement needed. these words say it all
ReplyDeleteYaYa my goodness me...WOW you have rendered me nearly speechless.
ReplyDeleteYou got it right last Easter but I surely understand about waiting.
Things as powerful have to be nurtured a bit.
Hugs HiC
It is lovely!
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ReplyDeletethat is beautiful... little by little till we have a world full of love
ReplyDeleteIt's wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThat is deeply touching. It can't be improved. Thanks for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteReally nice rhythm in this, Yamini, and I particularly like the repetition - almost like a chant.
ReplyDeletebeautiful
ReplyDeletebeautiful view of Christ. namaste, janice xx
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