Over at Murphy and Stanley's place it is last Friday of the month story day... click to read more!!!.
Except that for this month, due to a bit of a blog-jam (it is festive times after all) we are posting a bit early. Normally I use a photo to prompt my stories and this one came out of watching the seals in the firth last month; but we are also given a word prompt by M&S which we have to highlight in the story...
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Peering
through the glare of the low-slung sun’s light shafts, Bala blinked. Balanced
on his rock, the tide had risen to almost submerge him. When the tide was out,
there was enough room for Bigshanks the Shag and perhaps a couple of his brood
as well. Right now, though, it was seal room only.
Time to
find a bigger rock.
Bala
flipped over and slid into the dark and chill waters of the firth and headed
with the current towards the spit of land over which the sun now hung. It was a
lengthy swim, but he made the most of the current, allowing himself to drift as
much with it as possible, conserving energy for when he rounded the headland
and up into the loch he knew was behind. He’d been round there before, chasing
fish. Now, though, he wanted to find a place that was all his own.
The other
seals all tended to stay by the open water. The other young ones didn’t want to
play with him, due to his twisted flipper. They taunted him and butted
him. Even his mother had left him as
soon as the bull came sniffing round. She wanted fitter pups.
As he was
musing on these rejections, he hadn’t noticed that he had swum further up the
loch than he had ever intended. Here, the water was almost pond-like.
Bala was
brought out of his reverie by a raucous squawking overhead. It was Bigshanks!
“How come
you are here?” called Bala.
“I would
ask you that! This is part of my fishing
territory. …So, why are you up here?”
Bala
stopped and just floated in the water. Bigshanks made a gliding landing on the
glassy surface and paddled over to join him.
“Well?”
“To be
honest it was just an urge. The rock is too small for me now and no one was
really talking to me. I know there are some good fish up here, they taste
sweeter somehow…” Bala noted Bigshanks nodding at this point, “and then there
was the whispering.”
“Whispering?”
Bala
waggled his dud flipper in the air before answering. “That there is magic up
here. That I might be able to get my
flipper mended…” He stopped when he saw
a flicker of light in Bigshanks’ eyes. “What?”
“Bala my
young friend, there is much of mystery up at Lochend…but I think you should know that it is all
just fairy tales and nonsense dispensed by the kilters; you know, those
upright, hairless critters on the land, not a feather to wag among the lot of
them…tsk, they think gullible things we are. Long years back, one of your
ancestors was caught by the helper of the wummin and that mischief planted all sort of silly
notions about you seals being men-in-waiting and that the Wyrd-wummin up the
creek can fix up damages and make happiness…”
Bigshanks
stopped when he saw Bala blinking. “Wyrd-wummin?”
“Och,
Bala, it’s just the farmer’s wife who knows a thing or two about healing.”
“Thanks
Shankie, now I know I have to go. Will you come too?” The bird shook his head and spread his wings.
“Sorry young ‘un, you’re on your own for this one. Be safe…”
The seal
watched as his friend took off with long, laborious strokes of the air. It
would have been good to have Bigshanks along, but he also understood that, for
whatever reason, the bird didn’t think it was worth his time. Oh well. Turning slowly in the flat, cool
water, Bala headed further and further up the narrowing and shallowing loch,
towards the place where the hills bowed and curtsied to the water’s edge.
As there
came to be more rocks than liquid here, Bala worked his body with clumsy
flicking motions to clamber over them.
“It’s
easier on two legs you know.”
Bala
jumped out of skin.
Literally.
His seal skin dropped away and he became a white, naked critter, pale and limp
on the right foreleg. No that couldn’t
be right. It wasn’t a leg. He looked over to where the voice had been. There sat a plump…something…with brightly
coloured skins and a bell attached to the covering on its head.
“Come on then.”
“What are
you?!” demanded Bala.
“WHAT I am
is an elf. I gather up all the toys for Wyrd-wummin to wrap up and then her
hubby gets them out to all the kiddlies in need of fun. Now get a move on!”
“I’m no
toy!” yelled Bala.
“Oh is
that so? Is it not that you are called Bala?” The seal-boy nodded. “Have you
not the gaedhlig then, to know that the name means only ‘toy’? Even more than
that, it means ‘ball-toy’… now roll on over this way and we’ll away up the glen
to the wummin.”
Bala was
shocked. He was frightened. He was shivering and could feel tears pricking his
eyes. Tears? How did he know they were
tears? So much he knew and yet didn’t, but somehow he accepted that this was
what had to be done if he was to get a better flipper. He stumbled his way over
the slippery, sea-grassed rocks and followed the tubby little critter all the
way up the creek-side. It seemed to take hours. Then suddenly it was over.
There was
the Wyrd-wummin, sitting under a leafless rowan, decked in full red berry. She
beckoned to him. As he drew closer he was riveted by her eyes. Large as moons,
as dark as the water he had just left and lit with all the stars of the night
sky.
There were
no words. She simply reached over and held the bad flipper… he still thought of
it as that. Like the shock of hitting ice, he felt her touch and life flowed
into the damaged limb.
Then it
all stopped. With horror he realised that the limb was turning to wood. It crept up his other limbs also and worked
its way through him until he could not move. He was not breathing and yet he
knew he was still he. The wummin gathered his bundle of sticks to her and turned
them in her hands. He was being rolled and twisted and tightened and twined. He
blinked. Or that’s what he thought he
did. He was thrown onto a pile of other wooden shapes and felt their presence.
Heard their cries.
Along came
farmer. A large and white-furred fellow. “Ho ho ho ho! What a haul of toys we
have for all the kiddlies this year wummin.
You have done well!”
“SSSKKKARRRRKKKK!!”
came another sound, very familiar to Bala.
Bigshanks! Bala shouted and shouted with his thinking but could make no
sound. How could it be that Bigshanks was here? There was no time to question
it though. For the feathered friend swooped and grabbed Bala from the pile of
pining presents, fleeing as fast as possible now he bore the extra load.
Bigshanks
headed back to the pile of blubber and fur on the shoreline. He dropped the
ball of sticks onto the mess and made a bit of a crash landing beside it.
Bala felt
the water, felt his pelt, felt his sticks reviving and wriggling their way free
of their entrapment. As suddenly as he had lost his sealdom, so it was he
returned to the water as a seal once more. A complete seal. Four working flippers.
“Bigshanks! I can swim free and fast – but how did you know?”
The bird
was not with him he realised. He turned to where his rescuer had landed. There
was the multi-coloured mischief who had lured him in the first place…and then the
chubby elf said “I was with you always my friend. I am only in liege to
Wyrd-wummin for two months of the year. When you said what your plan was I
could see there was no changing your mind. I had to satisfy her demands of me.
Saving you was always going to be a matter of luck. That was what might be called
‘in the Nick of time…’”
(c) Yamini Ali MacLean 2014
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Oh my gosh, this was wonderful and riveting ...what an adventure!
ReplyDeleteBravo! Bravo! Well done! Beyond any expectations! Yes, riveting indeed!! A wonderful and wonderfully written story!
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Murphy & Stanley
YEA.... Bravo.... well done... what a grand story... and SUCH a fabulous ending...
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU fur sharing it with us..
Crikey Aunty .... I was riveted too!! Is there ANYTHING you can't do?? If Mum reads your story to a very special, caring, and kind Granddaughter, who she knows will LOVE this story, will she have to pay you Royalties or something?
ReplyDeleteSuper story, and we are SO relieved it had a happy ending!
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