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It's time to make Goulash with Grandma again!  (Micro-fiction fun...why don't you give it a go?) Use the picture prompt she provides to create simple, shortest of short, stories to tell its tale - kudos gained for using the weekly bonus word.  Today that is JAGGED

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Distracted, Billy flinched from the jagged frill of Berta’s bonnet.
(67 chrx)

As Berta bundled herself closer to Billy, his heart grabbed at him like a jagged stone underfoot.
(97 chrx)

Billy brazened it out. As he wildly thought over how to push Berta away, he spotted the jagged fence which had fallen on the road; too late...
(140 chrx)
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5 comments:

  1. Frankie Furter and Ernie8 February 2015 at 22:16

    SMOOTH use of the word Jagged. hehehehe

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    1. Yamini MacLean8 February 2015 at 22:20

      Hari OM
      Oh I see what you did there!!! schnigger.... Yxx

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  2. Tammy9 February 2015 at 07:17

    Amazing how much story you packed into those few characters! Even the names are perfect. You brought them to life.

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  3. The Adventures of the LLB Gang9 February 2015 at 07:33

    Ooooooo...Love the second stanza..."...his heart grabbed at him like a jagged stone underfoot." Awesome!

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  4. Jenn Jilks10 February 2015 at 05:38

    World play. Great fun.

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