Menoxtra - a little bit on the side.

It's time to make Goulash with Grandma again!  (Micro-fiction fun...why don't you give it a go?) Use the picture prompt she provides to create simple, shortest of short, stories to tell its tale - kudos gained for using the weekly bonus word.  Today that is JAGGED


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Distracted, Billy flinched from the jagged frill of Berta’s bonnet.
(67 chrx)

As Berta bundled herself closer to Billy, his heart grabbed at him like a jagged stone underfoot.
(97 chrx)

Billy brazened it out. As he wildly thought over how to push Berta away, he spotted the jagged fence which had fallen on the road; too late...
(140 chrx)

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    1. Hari OM
      Oh I see what you did there!!! schnigger.... Yxx

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  2. Amazing how much story you packed into those few characters! Even the names are perfect. You brought them to life.

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  3. Ooooooo...Love the second stanza..."...his heart grabbed at him like a jagged stone underfoot." Awesome!

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